Monday, 10 October 2016

Editorial crit 2


The stuff that seems to be favoured this time continues to be the animal farm based imagery and the Orwells' love of tea works. This is good as I personally also felt that these were the strongest, and am the most interested in furthering. The only issue with the Tea image being singled out is that I don't feel like it tonally matches the animal farm imagery if I were to have the three images featured in the same article.

Edit: I had a conversation with ben regarding the possible choices, and he felt it would be best to work with the animal farm imagery, noting that the images for the tea and homeless experiences would be beneficial to leave for the later stages in this unit.

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