Self initiated comic: Final outcome

Thanks to the previous work, creating pages is quite a streamlined effort, creating rough, then refined lines, and applying colour.

After all that thought and work, it is really satisfying to create final pages, to see the narrative come to life. I think these pages are a promising start to something, and can’t wait to build upon them, creating the finished comic personally. Being one of my first attempts at making a more refined comic, there are clear improvements that can be made to this, its exiting to consider the possible direction this project can take from here. The remainder of the refined pages, with text will be seen in the final Issu post.

Edit: I thought I should pop back with the final page of the comic example, seen as these two pages seem so clearly to have had the most influence from the research for this comic. The two characters talking in the car is quite clearly taking reference from the pulp fiction scene, concentrating on the characters and what they have to say by clearing he environment.

This on the other hand totally takes the action of moon night in to account, trying the replicate the pacing and scene content used. I think its a suitable start for an action scene, but the framing and positioning of the characters lacks the finesse of that found in moon knight. This is just a clear indication that I need to practice fight scenes. So onwards and upwards from here.