In an attempt to really portray Orwells annoyance, but inability to escape the situation, I really scaled him down compared to the hobo, having his "friend" all encompassing, truly inescapable. Changing the colour of the boobs has certainly helped to re enforce the idea of them being a separate entity to the figure. That being said, it still wasn't enough to really portray and contextualise what is happening in the scene. The surrounding area around the characters seemed quite empty, and could really do with filling, so I saw this as a great opportunity to add some type.
It's certainly a step in the right direction, but just not what i'm looking for. I feel the Idea is right, but the execution is what is letting it down. I want the text to be rougher, but I'll keep the colour consistent with the boobs, signalling both are connected as thoughts. Its time to take this spread to the next level with what it is sorely missing, a printed element.
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